Counting minutes, hours
Days, weeks
Time.
Time filled with
Thoughts of when we were
There.
There filled with
You. I am
Here
Here filled with
Me. You are
There.
Counting minutes, hours
Days, weeks
Time.
Time filled with
Thoughts of when we were
There.
There filled with
You. I am
Here
Here filled with
Me. You are
There.
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However…time is relevant. So where is there and here? 🙂
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There is no there! We are always in the “here”…that is how I explain…lol…because tomorrow never comes and yesterday is gone!
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well said … if I only could live by it.
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Nice poetic flow.
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Thanks, LeRoy!
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One wonders why it’s always like that… 🙂
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Wish I knew the answer…
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Again…..
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You know me…all I have are questions…answers mean I have to dig deeper!
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fun word play, time filled us,
so that no regrets or buts…
Cheers.
keep it up.
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Thank you. Will come over and take a look.
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Love this, three brilliant poems written in a day, I’m impressed. This has a kind of overlapping feel to it (not sure that makes sense) but I really like it
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Thank you. Enjoyed reading your work today.
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I love the last line. It delivers with such simple strength.
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Thank you.
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